Ami - Ami I’ve enjoyed your blog so far. It’s really well presented and You’ve a certain flair for layout when presenting your posts. I was really excited to read about your day as a runner – I wish you could have taken more pics! Your latest post on target audience is very thorough and really useful. What your blog is currently lacking is any sense of Yasmin herself- I don’t know what she looks like! There are a couple of posts detailing the type of clothes and jewellery she’d wear but it’s not fore-grounded yet. So get on the case with that – although I suspect it will feature in the pitch when you post that. Also – I don’t know which motifs/props will be used to create synergy over your products so don’t neglect that post either. Overall your use of technology is good – (although I’ve just scrolled back over 2 weeks to find a gif – rather static recently!) but don’t be complacent and try something new. Look on the front of the blogging checklist for inspiration. So overall, 1) synergy, 2) artist ‘look’ and image and 3) push your use of technology. Well done so far – and make sure you work your way up to level 4.
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ReplyDeleteAmi I’ve enjoyed your blog so far. It’s really well presented and You’ve a certain flair for layout when presenting your posts. I was really excited to read about your day as a runner – I wish you could have taken more pics! Your latest post on target audience is very thorough and really useful. What your blog is currently lacking is any sense of Yasmin herself- I don’t know what she looks like! There are a couple of posts detailing the type of clothes and jewellery she’d wear but it’s not fore-grounded yet. So get on the case with that – although I suspect it will feature in the pitch when you post that. Also – I don’t know which motifs/props will be used to create synergy over your products so don’t neglect that post either. Overall your use of technology is good – (although I’ve just scrolled back over 2 weeks to find a gif – rather static recently!) but don’t be complacent and try something new. Look on the front of the blogging checklist for inspiration. So overall, 1) synergy, 2) artist ‘look’ and image and 3) push your use of technology. Well done so far – and make sure you work your way up to level 4.