MESSAGE FOR ABIDA Abida – overall your blog is looking good so far and you’ve tackled your work quite thoroughly. I especially like your analysis of 3 music videos on 8 October. I am also really drawn to the artist’s name – it sounds great so well done to you and your group with that. However, one aspect which you’ve not really covered at all is synergy – doing neither the homework research task or tracking synergy across the products promoting Yasmin. – so it would be very beneficial to do this. We have handouts if you need them. Also, I’m beginning to get a sense of what Yasmin will look like, but I’ve only had glimmers of outfits and style, so more promotion of that would be useful too – although to be fair I guess this will be on your pitch when that gets posted. Some posts are a little on the short side (eg: promoting our artist) – so get out of that habit quickly! There is a good balance between your own posts and group posts at the moment. So, targets are 1) use more technology 2) have more posts about Yasmin and her style and 3) catch up with synergy.
MESSAGE FOR ABIDA
ReplyDeleteAbida – overall your blog is looking good so far and you’ve tackled your work quite thoroughly. I especially like your analysis of 3 music videos on 8 October. I am also really drawn to the artist’s name – it sounds great so well done to you and your group with that. However, one aspect which you’ve not really covered at all is synergy – doing neither the homework research task or tracking synergy across the products promoting Yasmin. – so it would be very beneficial to do this. We have handouts if you need them. Also, I’m beginning to get a sense of what Yasmin will look like, but I’ve only had glimmers of outfits and style, so more promotion of that would be useful too – although to be fair I guess this will be on your pitch when that gets posted. Some posts are a little on the short side (eg: promoting our artist) – so get out of that habit quickly! There is a good balance between your own posts and group posts at the moment. So, targets are 1) use more technology 2) have more posts about Yasmin and her style and 3) catch up with synergy.